Pretty wholesome dating sim, and I'm particularly grateful it inteoduced me to a cartoon that I somehow managed to sleep on despite its popularity. Hoping it won't get completely abandoned.
OMG I LOVE THIS. IT'S SUPER ADORABLE! Although I honestly can't support you with money at the moment, you have my full moral(?) support to continue this. I really loved it! The detail of his actions and customs is 10/10 and honestly I had made an rp of exactly this same plot with a friend, so I'm freaking out a lot!
Interesting. Gonna follow waiting for an android version.
Btw, the Panda's shirt quoting is a bit wrong.
太い is used for "thickness", not really for "fat", and the phrase structure is not in the correct way, specially the Past Tense in 太った, since it suggest he was fat, not anymore.
So the most appropriated phrase would be 大きな脂肪パンダ.
This one is suuuper adorable! Love how you replicated the artstyle of the show, it gives the game a really cozy feeling. I also really love the focus/emphasis on Grizz's figure and eating habits. Itch is full of VNs featuring characters who are conventionally attractive, some chubby/fat representation is very much needed~
The only criticism I could levy is that the writing can feel a bit rushed at times, both in terms of the narrative and grammar-wise. There's some punctuation marks missing here and there, there's inconsistent capitalization, and often the narrative feels like it's going at a breakneck pace. Maybe take a bit more time describing things or more thoroughly setting up the environment/situation so that the reader can better immerse themselves. Proofreading/revising/editing is half the work when it comes to writing~
But yeah, very fun and cute VN overall. Keep up the great work, can't wait for more to come! :3
Thank you for the kind words! I definitely rushed this in an effort to have something for people to look at haha. Really going to try and take my time, until the next actual update.
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I loved every second of this game, what a cute and adorable game, I'm addicted to it, it's definitely one of my comfort games <3
The vnn is so cute and romantic ヾ(*’Ｏ’*)/
I like it already since i downloaded i recommend to you this vn its so cute and adorable<3
Oh my gawd this was adorable I absolutely loved this i neeed more >-<
Pretty wholesome dating sim, and I'm particularly grateful it inteoduced me to a cartoon that I somehow managed to sleep on despite its popularity. Hoping it won't get completely abandoned.
The last build seems incompatible with itch.io app. Can you fix it if possible? i just find it more convenient to play game throught itch.io app.
Chapter 3 has me so excited for more, I dont know how Im gonna be patient but I cant wait to read more
Is project dead?
nah, just taking my sweet ass time
Will this be on Mac soon?
OMG I LOVE THIS. IT'S SUPER ADORABLE! Although I honestly can't support you with money at the moment, you have my full moral(?) support to continue this. I really loved it! The detail of his actions and customs is 10/10 and honestly I had made an rp of exactly this same plot with a friend, so I'm freaking out a lot!
Is a android one gonna be made?
Interesting. Gonna follow waiting for an android version.
Btw, the Panda's shirt quoting is a bit wrong.
太い is used for "thickness", not really for "fat", and the phrase structure is not in the correct way, specially the Past Tense in 太った, since it suggest he was fat, not anymore.
So the most appropriated phrase would be 大きな脂肪パンダ.
This one is suuuper adorable! Love how you replicated the artstyle of the show, it gives the game a really cozy feeling. I also really love the focus/emphasis on Grizz's figure and eating habits. Itch is full of VNs featuring characters who are conventionally attractive, some chubby/fat representation is very much needed~
The only criticism I could levy is that the writing can feel a bit rushed at times, both in terms of the narrative and grammar-wise. There's some punctuation marks missing here and there, there's inconsistent capitalization, and often the narrative feels like it's going at a breakneck pace. Maybe take a bit more time describing things or more thoroughly setting up the environment/situation so that the reader can better immerse themselves. Proofreading/revising/editing is half the work when it comes to writing~
But yeah, very fun and cute VN overall. Keep up the great work, can't wait for more to come! :3
Thank you for the kind words! I definitely rushed this in an effort to have something for people to look at haha. Really going to try and take my time, until the next actual update.
Again, thanks for playing!
Of course, I know how important feedback is for creators. And yeah, take as much time as you need! :3
Love this so far!!! Keep it up!
They are CHUBBY it's adorable.
YES!!!!!!!!!!!
A wonderful VN So far <3
O jogo terá uma versão Android
Really cute~ ^^_ it could use some work, but I really like what xou've got so far :)
i hope there is more to come i want to see more of this this is kind of fun and looks pretty interesting